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11 - Supervisory Feedback

Building Writing Scaffolds with Doctoral Students

from Section 3: - Negotiating Feedback: Interpersonal and Interactional Dimensions

Published online by Cambridge University Press:  19 July 2019

By
Sue Starfield
Edited by
Ken Hyland  and
Fiona Hyland
Ken Hyland
Affiliation:
The University of Hong Kong
Fiona Hyland
Affiliation:
The University of Hong Kong
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Feedback in Second Language Writing
Contexts and Issues
 , pp. 206 - 225
Publisher: Cambridge University Press
Print publication year: 2019

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